California Contract Review · Redlines · Negotiation Playbook

I review California contracts before you sign, redline the risks, and explain what to negotiate.

Most contract disputes are negotiation failures the parties locked into in the first draft. I read the contract you were sent, flag the indemnity, liability cap, IP, governing-law, termination, and dispute-resolution traps, and give you a written negotiation playbook. 48-hour turnaround on the standard tier.

2011 CA Bar admitted
#279869 CA State Bar
$349 Full review fixed fee
48 hrs Standard turnaround

Every review hits the same nine pressure points.

I do not just glance at a contract. I read every clause with a checklist that has been refined over 15 years of California commercial practice. The standard review covers these nine pressure points, in this order:

  • Indemnification scope. Who indemnifies whom, for what kinds of claims, under what triggers, and with what carve-outs. One-way indemnities favoring the counterparty are the single most common red flag I find in vendor and SaaS contracts.
  • Limitation of liability and damages caps. Whether the cap is per-claim or aggregate, whether it carves out willful misconduct, gross negligence, IP infringement, indemnity, and breach of confidentiality, and whether consequential damages are excluded entirely.
  • IP ownership and license grants. Whether work product is assigned, licensed, or co-owned. Whether background IP and pre-existing materials are properly carved out. Whether the work-for-hire language is correct under Cal. Labor Code 3351.5 and 17 U.S.C. 101.
  • Governing law and venue. Whether the contract picks California law (favorable for most CA-based parties) or attempts to apply a forum that ousts California public-policy protections (notably the non-compete and PAGA protections).
  • Termination rights. Termination for convenience, for cause, cure periods, post-termination obligations, surviving clauses, and wind-down compensation.
  • Payment terms. Net days, late fees, the practical realities of Cal. Civ. Code 3287 prejudgment interest, attorney-fee shifting, and dispute-pending payment obligations.
  • Automatic renewal. Whether the auto-renewal clause meets Cal. Bus. & Prof. Code 17601 et seq. and Cal. Bus. & Prof. Code 17602 disclosure requirements. Non-compliant auto-renewals are voidable in California.
  • Dispute resolution. Court vs arbitration, forum, governing rules (AAA, JAMS), fee-shifting, class waiver, PAGA carve-outs, jury waivers, and the practical cost of enforcement.
  • Boilerplate that matters. Notice, assignment, force majeure, severability, integration, amendment formality, and choice-of-counsel restrictions.

Each pressure point produces a GREEN, YELLOW, or RED flag in the written risk memo. GREEN means defensible. YELLOW means worth a negotiation ask. RED means do not sign without a fix.

Tier selector

Which contract review tier is right for your contract?

Tell me about the contract you are reviewing. I will recommend the right tier and explain the rationale based on contract type, length, your role, leverage, and dollar value.

Recommended tier
$599 Review + Revision
72-hour turnaround
Contract length15 pages
Tier fitStandard
A 15-page MSA with moderate leverage and $50,000 at stake usually warrants a redline. The Word redline with track changes gives you negotiation ammunition the other side will take seriously.

Recommendation only. Final scope depends on the contract document. If the contract exceeds 25 pages, multiple counterparties are involved, or the deal is part of a larger transaction (acquisition, financing), I will quote an hourly engagement at $240 per hour before any work starts.

How it works

Four steps from intake to delivered memo.

1

Send the contract

Submit the intake form below with the contract attached (Word or PDF). Include the deadline, your role, and any specific concerns. I respond within one business day to confirm scope and timing.

2

Engagement and payment

I send a one-page engagement letter confirming the tier, fee, deliverable, and turnaround. You countersign and pay, the clock starts.

3

Review and deliverable

I produce the risk memo (and redline, in the $599 tier) within the agreed turnaround. Each finding is GREEN, YELLOW, or RED with a statute citation where the contract conflicts with California law.

4

Negotiation support

You use the redline and fallback positions to negotiate. One revision pass after counterparty response is included in the $599 tier. Additional rounds are quoted hourly.

Pricing

Three ways to engage me on a contract.

Most contract clients fit one of the three tiers below. If your contract is longer than 25 pages, part of a larger deal, or requires direct negotiation with opposing counsel, I quote hourly at $240 per hour before starting.

Review + Revision Pass
$599+
Fixed fee for contracts up to 25 pages
  • Everything in the $349 package
  • Word redline with track changes
  • Attribution to Sergei Tokmakov, Esq.
  • Comment annotations on each material change
  • Three-tier fallback positions (ideal / acceptable / walk-away)
  • One revision pass after counterparty response
  • 72-hour turnaround
Request this package
Hourly redline / negotiation
$240/hr
Billed in 0.1-hour increments
  • Contracts over 25 pages
  • Multi-document deal packages
  • Direct negotiation with opposing counsel
  • Multiple revision rounds on a single contract
  • Drafting new clauses from scratch
  • Custom industry-specific provisions
  • No minimum block
Pay for a 1-hour engagement
Before you hire any contract reviewer

Three things you should know about contract review services.

Contract review is one of the most-marketed legal services on the internet, and quality varies dramatically. Whether you hire me or someone else, these three guardrails matter.

1. Defined scope: one contract per package

The $349 and $599 fixed-fee packages cover one contract up to 25 pages. They do not include reviewing companion documents (statements of work, order forms, schedules, exhibits) unless they total under 25 pages with the main agreement. They do not include negotiation rounds with opposing counsel. Contract-package deals (e.g., a SaaS MSA plus a separate data processing addendum plus a separate order form) are quoted hourly.

2. Revision count clarity

The $349 tier includes one round of follow-up questions by email after delivery. The $599 tier includes unlimited revisions within the original scope plus one revision pass after counterparty response within 30 days. If the counterparty rewrites the contract substantially, that becomes a new engagement, quoted before any extra work. I will not run up hours without notifying you in writing first.

3. What a review cannot do

A contract review cannot predict whether the counterparty will perform in good faith. A counterparty with a clean contract can still breach. A counterparty with a problematic contract can still perform without incident. The review tells you what the contract requires and where the exposure is; the business decision to sign, negotiate, or walk remains yours. A review also cannot replace your business judgment about whether the deal makes economic sense.

Start an intake

Send the contract.

No call required. Send the contract, tell me your role and the deadline, and I respond within one business day with scope and fee. If your contract is not a fit, I will tell you and point you to a better resource.

FAQ

Frequently asked questions.

Legal notice. This page describes legal services offered by Sergei Tokmakov, Esq., a California-licensed attorney (CA Bar No. 279869). Content on this page is for informational purposes only and does not constitute legal advice or create an attorney-client relationship. An attorney-client relationship is formed only by a signed written engagement agreement. Past results do not guarantee future outcomes. California Rules of Professional Conduct govern this practice.